tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2452286208861017910.post5255484991308822918..comments2024-01-31T13:42:49.242-08:00Comments on Koyagidō Kanwa<br>子山羊堂閑話: Boys growin' upGilles Poitrashttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13546088581629827031noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2452286208861017910.post-10541331342363382962011-08-14T07:27:06.316-07:002011-08-14T07:27:06.316-07:00True that is a little clumsy.
Changed.
And I cha...True that is a little clumsy.<br /><br />Changed.<br /><br />And I changed a pile of typos, weird grammar etc on this one before posting it.Gilles Poitrashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13546088581629827031noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2452286208861017910.post-64721616950127498262011-08-13T23:55:33.771-07:002011-08-13T23:55:33.771-07:00In "hanging out in their 'secret base'...In "hanging out in their 'secret base' a hut built of very tall weeds", change "'secret base' a hut" to "'secret base'—a hut".jwatson8https://www.blogger.com/profile/10294278607478860908noreply@blogger.com